- I think it would be better for the vertical axes to start at 0. Otherwise, variations look much greater than they are.
- There is a typo in "However, I’m fairly confident that they did play some role in the decrease in broiler mortality since 2012". "increase", not "decrease".
- The quantities plotted in the large graph increase by 20 % and 8 %, not 120 % and 108 %.
Great post, Robert! Nitpicks:
- I think it would be better for the vertical axes to start at 0. Otherwise, variations look much greater than they are.
- There is a typo in "However, I’m fairly confident that they did play some role in the decrease in broiler mortality since 2012". "increase", not "decrease".
- The quantities plotted in the large graph increase by 20 % and 8 %, not 120 % and 108 %.